Compositions, feedback and sketch
Compositional shots - Using the 3D model i had made, I took some compositional shots from different angles. I tried to capture as many of my key models [cargo containers, main building, wall and watchtower] in the piece as possible whilst also making the scene feel believable and getting a good balance of areas of detail and rest. below are some notes on my thoughts on each compositional shot. Looking at this one, it is a bit cluttered and their is no real main focus, especially not on my hero building. I think the lights could be utilized to make some leading lines and draw focus to an element in the scene however from this angle they act more as clutter than visual aids to draw the viewer's eye. I really want either the hero building to be the centre of focus, or the layout of the map, this composition really doesn't seem to be achieving either in my eyes. I did quite like this composition, as stated before i think the lights in this piece do act as leading lines to the main...